Score: 10

"hmm..."

submission: The Things We Never Said

date: November 26, 2009

I didn't like the song, the animation was lacking.

but i could relate to it. it was about something real, and a person can interpret and take something personal out of this flash. many of us have been to similar grounds the images of this flash portray. and with that holds its spot on the front page.

the segment toward the end with the destructing wall, seemed to capture the strongest feeling of the song and emotion you wanted to portray. and as for the animation i can see potential. just keep at it.

the music..well what can i say, its not my style.

nice job.

Score: 10

"Ok that was pretty funny"

submission: 3rd Grade Transformers

date: October 26, 2009

seriously, i know a few trolls are going to try and vote this down just because it's egoraptor and they will just bitch that people are only voting because its popular vote.

but this was pretty freaking hilarious, it helps if you've seen faith of the fallen, (not gonna post my opinions on it, cause i know no one cares) but you don't necessarily have to in order to enjoy the silly humor. also whats interesting is that it isn't the typical ego rapter style, not "WOWIEZOWIE BLEEEAAAA!" but something just a lil different but just as hilarious.

Score: 10

"O_O"

submission: -Last Resort-

date: October 25, 2009

OH MY F@#$-ING GOD!.. that was pretty much the reaction i had the whole time watching this, now I've seen some crazy creepy things on the net, we all have of course, but this by far had that effect of keeping my attention and just creeping me out in a scary but still fun way. most of the time when i see a creepy vid on NG its just a lot of disturbing images with no real story or purpose other than to just be creepy or "artistic", in the end the artistry just falls flat and they just come off as silly and stupid. this was meant to entertain, and came off as creative and scary.

good job. i give you a 10 for provoking emotion and fear out of me.

Score: 8

"I also really enjoyed this game however"

submission: My Pet Protector

date: September 13, 2009

i noticed that with as many apprentice i had one who i thought for sure would become something great after 18 (100% combat, combat defense fame yadda yadda ya) green check cleared every dungeon, studied theology to lower my sin and after al that turned 18 people from all over the continent came to wish me off, and he still got unknown. my question is, is this telling us we have to play on the kongregate website to see anything best for our apprentice, or are we supposed to just end up as priest the whole time? Because after reading the reviews, it seems that all people get is priest or unknown.

dont get me wrong its still a fun game, all i can figure I'm still playing it wrong or something.

Score: 10

"That video was incredibly fun"

submission: Stamp on the Ground

date: September 10, 2009

though i didn't get a few of the refs till the credits, i can say for sure your work has made me smile.
it also made me want to get out my DDR pad and share in the same joy your characters have in your movie. i really enjoy playing DDR, sadly i got into it right around when its popularity was half waned.
Perhaps this may spark some interest again, ok that's just wishful thinking but still.

now to the vid, what i enjoyed most was your take on how each character looked, they all held a very strong presence of your particular style, but they still remained recognizable, and i would have to say you did a rather good job of staying true to each beings personality if they were confronted by this same kind of scenario.

all in all, i would have to say you deserve evry positive review you recive, thank you for the laughs.

Score: 7

"Hmmm nice but"

submission: Madness Underworld

date: September 5, 2009

to be fair, i feel that this would have done a lot better as its own flash story series with your own original charicter design, story and theme, i understand that this was meant to be a madness tribute, but it throws so much in that isn't madness.

don't get me wrong, i can see you have a lot of great ideas, and you put a lot of effort into it, its just those things clash with the same maddness routine we get so often.

maddness is its own thing and its kinda hard these days to make something that holds water without it being a basic clone, or tired joke. so adding things that are just not common to the maddness universe with no real explanation just alienates the concept

things like the sudden super powers and stones and whats with this father thing? see those items would have more to stand on if you were to put them to something unique, i saw a lot of potential with that masked character.

you would just need to work on your story line, so much of whatever the plot was, seemed so sparatic that it tended to get in the way of the action instead of tying things together or creating a stable base.

i will say you do have some nice ideas on action sequences and you do have some great potential. so keep it up.

Score: 8

"ok not bad but"

submission: Ed & his inner demons #3

date: September 3, 2009

I really like where your going with how you made the demons a lot more sane then one would think, the whole jerk/idiot duo is usually a great combination and i really like all the crazy crap running around i his head...that lil triple faced thing scares the hell out of me though, the humor of the demons not even knowing what it is only makes it better.

keep going with the jokes that make you think to get the punch line...um the best example was the taco guy and the "ok we need to find a bathroom" gag, that was great.

good luck with 4, the only thing i can suggest as some two bit viewer with an even cheaper opinion is find some common ground with who your going to focus on, like how your making more of a story with the demons and the actions in his head vs what we see ed doing. so far i like how its more about the demons and the ed stuff seems more for immediate shock and end result humor. just don't let yourself fall the way adult swim did and just do silly random crap for the sake of being silly and random, the world needs clever humor.

Score: 8

"Holy Hell"

submission: Ed & His Inner Demons #1

date: September 3, 2009

ok i admit at first it wasn't growing on me, but this is only the first ep, i wanted to to watch it before i saw 3, it started off with what seemed like typical immature humor, like it was just going to be one dumb over the top visual joke after another which would just eventually become nonsensical silliness over what could possibly be something clever an example would be the airplane movies over todays crap like epic and date movie <shudders) but to each his own.

however you managed to grow it into something that kept my attention. towards the end you found that clever lil niche with the happy thoughts and 3 day t-shirt joke.

The part the got to me to really laugh had to be when we took a look inside his head, seeing how his happy thoughts were just as nutz or even crazier than the demons themselves, all of them just running about in utter madness blowing up <chuckles) yeah ok i really enjoyed it.

but i only gave a because, there is stil a lot of potential to go wrong, such as with the delivery of various jokes. i'll just have to watch the next two to see what you come up woith next. still hilarious though.

Score: 10

"<grins)"

submission: The old wolf

date: September 1, 2009

as simple and short as it was, it was a very nice homage to such a under appreciated and noble being, your sketches were quite enjoyable. as i said before though it was short it was still very sweet.

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Blattaria Blast

date: July 27, 2009

ok i have to admit, at first i was thinking it was just the same stale cliche, what with the, from what i feel, overused ren and stimpy soundtrack. even though i didnt know what was gonna happen i kinda felt like i could predict the outcome.
buuuuuutttt.. once it got going yeah it turnedout to be pretty fun and got your point accross, a chill scientist showing for reasons god only knows that science is friggen awesome. the end credits added a lot as well. good job.